Character Concept - Vanas Term 2 week 1-4

Travis clarke term 2 class 4 4
Travis clarke term 2 class 3 3
Coloured Character
Travis clarke term 2 class 3 2
Value W/O line work
Travis clarke term 2 class 2 2
New Thumbnails and character rough
Travis clarke class 1 2
First character thumbnails

The coloured Character for my project at Vanas(vanas.ca), for concept art. My teacher really made me think about the process I use and helped me to hone in on the idea I was going for. I feel I have much to improve on with my characters, and even though I am just finishing this, there is many flaws, Like with the face, that I will be keeping in mind for the next project ;P

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